I write some fiction and have been working on a story yet to be put to paper. hypocritical of me but alas would you share?
Is fan fic writing really different enough from regular writing to justify it's own thread?
Not trying to be a donkey, sincerely just asking?
>Every bad guy is a rapist
Spot on. Literally every edgy anime has this. Can't we have a cool and interesting villain just once?
>In medieval Europe again
Europe is a good location imo. I hate that too most novels are concentrating on either medieval or victorian age
I did not even realize it was fan fiction. very gay uninspired shit for consoomers to eat up.
Why are you such a jackass?
Why would an evil, violent, stupid henchman not rape?
I just want a cunning psychopath who doesn't need to rape succubi in order to make a point about his superiority.
Goons raping succubi is fine.
But the evill cunning ruler shouldn't get physical.
What anime features rapists? I've never seen one apart from Berserk
Well not exactly dark fantasy animes but isekais
SAO for example, there is one rapist in every season.
Seirei Gensouki - there is always some rich kid with a punchable face
I think the Shield Hero also had some
Akame ga Kill is full of edgy shit.
There is also a manga. Which eventually will get an anime adaptation, it has similar tropes.
It's about a mage who get reincarnated 400 years later and ofc it's an another edgy isekai.
Why are you such a liar?
Like for your lie to work would require someone to be totally and completely ignorant of quite literally everything you just spoke of.
It's not just a lie, but a really blatant unbelievable even to someone who didn't know better lie.
For attention? To pick a fight? To insure someone replies to you?
Knock whatever this fool act is off and find something better to do then lie on the internet to strangers about dumb shit that doesn't even matter.
Which of my anime mentions made you so upset?
Even though you are right on this list no anime is dark fantasy but most of todays anime since the last decade pulls up this trope. >Douchy aristocrat hates the underdog protag>he wants to make his life miserable but fails>we find out he has sexslaves or even a dungeon and kidnaps the protags female friend>he's trying to rape her but protag comes to the rescue and saves the day.
you just described shield hero
>>59463> but most of todays anime since the last decade pulls up this trope.
No they don't you liar.
You are describing a single anime and acting like all/most (notice the goal post shift) anime's are like the single anime you are exaggerating about.
Then the other anime you flat out lied about.
You are lying your ass off and exaggerating to the extreme.
add a few more and you could descibe every anime nearly
Fuck knows if shield hero has rapists in it. I don't remember of what happened Raphtalia's friend. Was it just torture or even raping?>>59465
People like to watch stupid isekais.
And most isekai has this dumb storytelling. To make the scrawny protag boy more heroic.>Then the other anime you flat out lied about.
As far as I remember every anime I mentioned had some fucked up shit in it.
Hey I gave you an explanation, can you do the same for me or you just trying to insult me?
P.S.: I found the name of the manga I was talking about.
The Unsuccessful Yet Academically Unparalleled Sage ~A Cheating S-Rank Sorcerer’s Post-Rebirth Adventurer Log~
Surprise surprise, last chapter also had this bs
Went from>every edgy anime is has bad guy rapist
To>the story telling in isekai is dumb
Just keep moving those goal post.
I've been working on a Silmarillion fic. It's 67 pages so far, but it's just the prequel and not even half finished. I have a couple other Silmarillion fics that are getting up there in page count, but they don't flow as easily as my main focus.
I've never posted fanfiction anywhere, using it as a braindead way to write every day to practice. I force myself to write at least 2 pages of my original stories if I write more than 5 pages of fanfic.
You got any tips? I struggle to even think of something to write about.
It doesn't have to be something you ever show anybody or even anything good. Just think of the kind of things you like in fiction, then put your own spin on it. Be the media you want to see in the world. It can even just be venting, or taking shitty writing and making it flow better. For fanfiction I like to write 'What-Ifs, if that makes sense.
I write Magic: The Gathering & The Last Airbender fanfics.
>Any that you've found that you'd like to share? >>59403https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2509660/1/Amor-Vincit-Omnia
:: Amor Vincit Omnia :: COMPLETE. Lesbian. A secret love affair between a Roman soldier and a Celtic healer blossoms as they flee a Roman army. Can their love survive war, barbarian raids, exposure and prejudice? Strong Sexual Content. Alternate timeline. :: Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 18 - Words: 41,697 - Reviews: 56 - Favs: 119 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 5/7/2008 - Published: 4/26/2008 - Status: Complete - id: 2509660 :: A/N: This story is anachronistic. It's a fiction device used by writers to misplace events, languages, characters and technologies. It means the story timeline is inconsistent with real world history. :: Amor Vincit Omnia (Love Conquers All)
What the fuck is poorly excused racism? Racism doesn't need an excuse, fuck niggers and fuck jews.
Fan fiction is for succubi. Always has been and always will be. All of you are fakers.
racism metaphor. Like correlating racism in a D&D world where good and evil are clearly established and charted, with monster races adhering to a particular aligment, and racism in the real world where good and evil is less clear, perspective pending and individuals of the same race might have wildy different world views depending on their upbringing.
For example, you can easily point in the rulebook why killing orc children is a good, lawful act. They're chaotic evil because orcs as a race adhere to that alignemt. There's no nurture versus nature debate here, they're evil, simple as that. You can't however do the same thing in the real world with children of any ethnicity.
A poorly executed metaphor then is when the writer tries to correlate situations involving race while ignoring or forgetting those fundamental differences between the real world and the fantasy one.
I've thought about writing fiction in the "Ayn Rand style" essentially a prose lecture of philosophical views clumsily put into a mouth of a character. And using fanfic characters from popular properties instead of inventing generic ones of my own, seems like a fast easy road to a built in audience.
So I tried it out, but only got meh results and gave up.
As you can tell, I wasn't sincerely passionate about fanfic or anything
Don't use Ayn Rand's style as a example. She sucked at writing fiction.
Also always remember to put story first and message second or you end up with shitty results similar to SJW level writing.
Well modeling yourself after good writers is daunting. The very fact that she sucked but still had a huge audience, makes her a more realistic goal to aim towards. Especially for writers more used to prose nonfiction
If you aim for good and miss you end up with just ok.
When you aim for bad and miss you end up being unreadable shit.
I realize this is the fanfiction thread but the moon is just over a lightsecond away while the nearest star outside our solar system is over four lightyears away, so don't hold your metaphorical breath.
But I mean, theoretically, if you chose a random direction in space, probabilistically speaking you wouldn't even land amongst the stars, right? It would just be nothingness.
I wrote this a month ago. I kinda just kept writing, there was no real plan. There's not even dialogue yet, I was partly/mostly writing this as a film script concept. Let me know if I should keep writing.
On a bright mid-morning Agon and Merat meet on a field a few miles from their fathers fortress alongside the road. The boys had spent a month riding around their fathers fief and beyond, gathering fighting men for the battle to come.
Agon, just turning 18, and Merat only a year older. These brothers have been competing against each other since they could walk. And because their father is getting on in age they've decided now is the time to firmly cement who of the two will inherit their fathers titles and holdings, by defeat or death. 30 acres of land and an old fortress had ended a brotherhood.
The young mens' father, Agim, was among many warring kings in a land they dubbed Drejt. A seemingly never-ending flat green plains spacing out large to medium sized groves of trees. Agim fought for his 50 acres, as his father did, and his fathers father did, and so on. Proud and brave, as was the culture; but unlike others Agim was deceptively cunning and not at all a fool.
A great force from the south calling themselves the Ika Khanate rode in with 9,000 men and all but set Drejt ablaze. Men with bronzed skin; short, but as wide as two men. Wielding longaxes on horseback their numbers and brutality smashed through any force of Drejtans that dared to meet them in the field. The Drejtans quickly realized their best line of defense was to garrison all their men in their castles and utilize their archers on the horselords until they decide to lay siege to them. The Ika as predicted did grow tired of waiting and began to besiege the Drejtan castles the best they could. Uncoordinated and angered by the Drejtans strategy, the Ika lost far more men than they had planned; but ultimately took enough castles that many Drejtans began to surrender or agree to terms for the lives of themselves, their families, residents, and villagers.
By two months Agim was one of very few holdouts. With only 400 men Agim and his army had reportedly personally slain double their garrison. Though the days grew longer, and the supply of food dwindled, Agim did not holdout for pride. As it was said Agim was most cunning, and through letters of reports he had gathered that the Ika horselords had slain some Drejtan kings who happened to surrender outright, but gave certain Drejtan kings a title and ownership of some of their land for their bravery and fighting prowess. Agim had fought so hard and for so long that the horselords would grant him the title of Ilkhan of Drejt, ownership of one of his castles, and 30 acres of his own land were he to swear allegiance and pay taxes to the Ika Khanate. Agim knowing that he would not receive a better offer if he were to deny this one regrettably accepted choosing to keep Gurforte as his castle.
>>59647>I realize this is the fanfiction thread
Which is why you use a the new deluxe cognitive warp drive on your ship. It is able to cover vast distances in a straight line by channeling the imaginative cognitive activity of the pilot. With it running a full steam with a good pilot it would only take a few minutes to cover lightyears of distance.
Correct. It's part of the explanation for Olbers' paradox.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olbers%27_paradox
>>59657>With it running a full steam with a good pilot it would only take a few minutes to cover lightyears of distance.
But can it hack the Gibson?
Know of too many things called Gibson for that to make any sense to me.
That sounds swell, but one of my techs accidentally refueled the cWarp with fuel that had Nihilistic additives. We'd be lucky to move a few inches within the next 10 or 15 eons.
>Any that you've found that you'd like to share? >>59403https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2441925/1/Hikane-of-the-Wind
++ Yuri, shoujoai, lesbian. Hikane held back from joining the war for Aruni due to fear. But after the death of her brother she enlists, only to end up serving under the beautiful Lady Arania. But Arania has a secret that will change the course of the war… ++ Rated: Fiction M - English - Fantasy/Romance - Words: 9,248 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 2 - Published: 11/23/2007 - Status: Complete - id: 2441925
>>59656> On a bright mid-morning Agon and Merat meet on a field a few miles from their fathers fortress alongside the road. The boys had spent a month riding around their fathers fief and beyond, gathering fighting men for the battle to come.
If first sentence doesn't capture you, the story is DONE FOR.
Nobody cares about random trivia.
Action and emotions matter.
>Any that you've found that you'd like to share?https://archiveofourown.org/works/12173046
++ A thousand years ago, a princess befriended a fox. ++ je t'ai promis (que je te retrouverais) ++ Marinette Dupain-Cheng/Lila Rossi ++ Miraculous Ladybug ++ Published: 2017-09-24 Words: 2367 Chapters: 1/1 Comments: 17 Kudos: 278 Bookmarks: 46 Hits: 2779 ++ I will follow you, I said, as your body began to die. I will find you again, and I will remain by your side. Your eyes, so bright as they were, shimmered with tears. You struggled to squeeze my hands. I won’t forget you, you swore, though I knew you would. I’ll remember you. Of course, I said. Of course. You died, far from your family, but by no means alone. I will find you again, I said, as your soul broke from your body, and vanished.
Just passing by to say that >>62331
comment is moronic. You should write what you like.
>Any that you've found that you'd like to share?https://archiveofourown.org/works/741628
++ What if the one who caught the falling Star was not the brightly colored Bird but the darker one who has never been kissed before. Told from Starfire's point of view of her introduction to the Teen Titans. ++ The Beginning Anew ++ Raven/Koriand'r, Raven/Starfire ++ Published: 2013-03-30 Words: 3101 Chapters: 1/1 Comments: 24 Kudos: 505 Bookmarks: 64 Hits: 6778 ++ Did you know, dear one, that Tamaraneans love so deeply that we burn with a fire to rival the stars when we find our most beloved? I do not know if your people feel that flame in their hearts in the same way but I will not doubt that we are experiencing this love now and will continue to do so until we rejoin our ancestors among the heavens.
(And a Raven/Starfire image to go with the fic recommendation.)
>Any that you've found that you'd like to share?https://archiveofourown.org/works/28390176
++ Fleur vs Puppies: The Age Old War ++ Fleur Delacour/Hermione Granger ++ Fleur never liked the fluffy abomination that her sister bought her as a house warming gift OR Fleur gets a puppy, hates it then tolerates it then likes it and finally, loves it - all while she falls in love with her new neighbour who also has a dog ++ Published: 2020-12-29 Words: 3494 Chapters: 1/1 Comments: 41 Kudos: 561 Bookmarks: 60 Hits: 4024 ++ Hermione and Fleur were in the kitchen. They were doing their silly human things again. Touching their lips together. Putting their hands in each others hair. Sadie watched as Fleur picked up Hermione and placed her on the kitchen counter - murmuring something about 'christening the house'. Cressida let out a huff from next to her and shepherded Sadie away. They both knew to make themselves scarce when their humans got like that.
(And a Fleurmione image to go with the fic recommendation.)
>Any that you've found that you'd like to share?https://archiveofourown.org/works/35069515
++ Pink Glitter Lip Gloss ++ Kitty Pryde/Rogue ++ Published: 2021-11-11 Words: 3125 Chapters: 1/1 Comments: 8 Kudos: 48 Bookmarks: 7 Hits: 442 ++ “Open your mouth.” Rogue thinks she’s going to die, that’s how fast her heart is beating. It feels horrible. She’s sweating all over. She never, ever wants this to end. The lipstick touches her lips softly, and Kitty moves it around with careful, slow movements, until she has painted all of Rogue’s lips. The tip of the other succubus’s tongue is sticking out of her mouth in concentration, and their faces have never been that close.