>>317814never mind.
after finally sitting down to read your "lore dump" I can tell this is a poorly thought out half assed daydream that you expect someone else to flesh out.
Also
>the narrator isNigga, you ain't wrote anything yet, what the fuck do you mean the narrator?
>im thinking we do 13 episodesI'm thinking you are delutional.
13 episodes of what?
Who is this "we" you speak of.
Rather than be totally critical I will offer some well intentioned advice at this point.
Actually try to write a full story of some sort set in the world.
One with a solid beginning, middle, and end. Be it a short story, a novella, or script. As long as it's a full story that is long enough that it forces you to mentally flesh out the world from at least one charicter's POV.
This will dramatically improve your world building and create a foundation for others build off of.
Right now you don't have lore.
You have a loose undeveloped scattering of ideas.